Correlative Conjunctions.
7.7.1 Correlative Conjunctions.
Parallelism may rely on accepted cues (either/or, neither/nor, not only/but also, both/and). All elements of the parallelism that appear on one side of the coordinating conjunction should match corresponding elements on the other side.
Avoid: |
The compleat physician has not only mastered the science of medicine but also its art. |
Correct: |
The compleat physician has mastered not only the science of medicine but also its art. |
Better: |
The compleat physician has mastered both the science and the art of medicine. |
Avoid: |
Poor drug efficacy may be caused by either lack of absorption or by increased clearance. |
Correct: |
Poor drug efficacy may be caused either by lack of absorption or by increased clearance. |
Also correct: |
Poor drug efficacy may be caused by either lack of absorption or increased clearance. |
Avoid: |
Three patients either took their medication incorrectly or not at all. |
Correct: |
Three patients took their medication either incorrectly or not at all. |
Note: Either/or is used with only 2 comparators (use with more than 2 items is considered nonstandard).
Incorrect: |
This medication can be taken with either water, milk, or juice. |
Correct: |
This medication can be taken with water, milk, or juice. |
Note: Avoid the use of nor when the first negative is expressed by not or no.